I added more detail in this go-round as you can see in the buildings in the background of panels 7 and 9.
Also, Bill’s Candy Shop in panels 10, 11, 12.
By seeing all the panels, you begin to see the characters’ personalities.
For example, I noticed Grandpa Joe to be a cynical character at the beginning until he finds out Charlie has found the Golden Ticket.
I tried to change his personality to a happy character from then on.
Charlie has always been a positive little guy throughout the story.

